My Day 1 At Camp / Night Detectives

This is my Tagxedo that I made that is based on camp 

& it has my day 1 story on it. I hope you 

like it. :-)

WALT choose words that describe a moment (in an exciting way) for the reader

YOUR SIGNS OF SUCCESS

• begins in the action
• present tense (I am, not I was)
• short, sharp sentences
• strong verbs
• uses the senses (look, feel, hear, taste, smell)
• language features (simile, alliteration, onomatopoeia, metaphor)
• show personality (sounds like you, humor, feelings, exaggeration)

                               Night Detectives

Day one.

Tonight is our first night at Camp Kaitawa and we are going to do a night detective challenge.

Yay!!!!!! we finally arrive at the night detective challenge we all get out of our vans and head to  the bush scared as anything. We start to go into the bush near Michael's grave.The first word we see is the word Michael...... and so we keep going and then it says Noonan welcomes you to Camp Kaitawa I may return.... and as soon as Crighton saw the word return he ran back towards me and said “nah  I’m getting out of here and so I pushed him forward so he kept going. After that we saw another word and it said on a full moon night...... Have fun. And now its over we have to walk back to camp on the side of the road ‘Wow that was fun” Crighton said to our whole team.