Wednesday 27 March 2013

My Swimming Story

Here is my Swimming story from last week that i finished for my blog.
It's about when i whent swimming one time. :-) i hope you like it.


4 comments:

  1. Hey Nakita,
    I really like that you said you were concentrating on like the cold water or the sharp concrete!

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  2. Cool Nakita that was an awesome peace of writing .

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  3. Awesome Nakita.
    That is an awesome story.
    Great vocabulary and adjectives.

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  4. My buddy kady also thinks this story is a cool story because
    it is interesting.

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